The spring piece is pretty and I like how the details sort of fall away into spring. However, the other WCW poem has too much "person interaction" in it to really be a word painting. The things we touch tell stories even when we are out of the picture. What, for example, would a poem about a discarded hamburger wrapper say about the one who left it behind? 18
The spring piece is pretty and I like how the details sort of fall away into spring. However, the other WCW poem has too much "person interaction" in it to really be a word painting. The things we touch tell stories even when we are out of the picture. What, for example, would a poem about a discarded hamburger wrapper say about the one who left it behind? 18
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